WHAT
DID THE CRITICS SAID ABOUT
Shraban
AGNISHATDAL
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Shraban 1426, July 2019
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Shraban 1426 (https://shoptly.com/sharmishthabasu
) Critique:
By your good old editor, my much cherished critique Troy is really
busy these days, so I am picking up the pen and editing the works of
my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be short and sweet!
Starving
Kids by S4: A
really dark incident that is not the first one of its kind and won’t
be the last one I am afraid. But I will be really happy to know that
this thing is stopped for good nationally or globally.
Berlin
2: Part 3 by Brieuc Martin Onraet: Now
the story has taken a really interesting turn. A handsome captain,
brand new uniform and a trip on plane, to where? Will be waiting for
Bhadra piece.
Tenali
Raman goes sleuthing by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Two
women show up in the court of Krishnachandra Roy, each claiming to be
the owner of a house, the fate of the house now depends on Tenali
Raman, let us see what the extremely intelligent man does in next
month’s piece!
The
gardens of Sarusammog 2 by Troy David Loy:
No not a thief, just a lost traveler, Sarusammog meets Meera! But for
very briefly, she disappears in a flash leaving a gift for Saru, a
female form of Sarusammog.
Born
again Soul by Dom Collucci:
Another Zen poem from Dom, this month’s poem talks about our
rebirth, when we rise above the identity that our parents and
surroundings have given us and realize who we truly are!
Bitter
Pill dose 21 by Bitter Pill: Religion 4:
Modern media are truly as helpful to hate mongers as are modern
weapon-makers! Another piece of quite true words about fanatics and
their spiteful mind.
Budapest
Missives 7 by Juliette Roques:
This month Juliette has shared a beautiful cityscape again, very
beautiful one!
Xmas
in Camelot by Freya Pickard: This
month Freya talks about Xmas in Camelot, a collection of ten stories
of quite versatile taste.
Click
go the shears 4 by Pat Ritters: Looks
like to get something you almost always have to lose something. Joe
Gibson sacrificed his freedom for his friend but his friend lost his
love and is now out to start life afresh as Joe heads for prison.
Great story for sure!
Dirkball
4 by Robert Sherriff: Robert
is sharing beautiful artworks from his storybook “dirkball”, it
is for little kids. I love the beautiful sketches a lot! I am sure
the book will be worth keeping for adults and kids both! This month’s
sketch is a colourful mice party?
I
believe that will be it for my critique as an editor for the month of
Shraban 1426, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course
there is truckloads of more works there!
Well
I sure hope Troy will be back real soon, he will be reviewing the
previous month’s works and I being the editor and having the
advantage will share the current month’s critique with you.
Hope
you enjoyed these short critiques!
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