Agnishatdal Bhadra 1426, August 2019 critique by Editor Sharmishtha Basu

Agnishatdal Bhadra 1426

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Critique:

Agnishatdal Bhadra 1426, August 2019

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Agnishatdal Bhadra 1426, August 2019

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By your good old editor, few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be short and sweet!

Berlin 2: Part 2 by Brieuc Martin Onraet: The story is still very, very interesting, a young girl who is suddenly getting whisked away to an undisclosed place for secret army affair. Waiting for the next issue!

Tenaliraman goes sleuthing part 2 by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Tenaliaman is off to the disputed property to check out the claims made by two women, and the story is getting more and more interesting! Wonder what will happen at the end!

Lyapunov’s children by Troy David Loy: Fascinating story about world in an alien moon. Absolutely fascinating and beautifully described piece of writing!

As of above by Dom Collucci: Very thought provoking poem! We start our journey guided and mentored by many a things and people, then we pick up our own path! So very true!

Bitter Pill dose 22 by Bitter Pill: Religion: This month BP is talking about the clash of religion and science and how both of them are little or more obstinate about many things. I agree about that obstinacy part a lot!

My mythology by Freya Pickard: This book is very close to Freya’s heart. Her vicious struggle with cancer and its outcome are shared in this book. The cover is haunting!

Drovers by Pat Ritters: A new story has begun. Starts with a cowgirl, helping her dad to round up the cattle! Quite interesting start!

Dirkball 5 by Robert Sherriff: Robert is the second new author in Ashar, two new members in one month sounds awesome! Right? Robert is sharing beautiful artworks from his storybook “dirkball”, it is for little kids. I love the beautiful sketches a lot! I am sure the book will be worth keeping for adults and kids both!

Bunch of hypocrites by S4: I fully agree about one thing with the author, at least one thing I mean, and that is Indians should let go of their hypocrisy if they want to really improve in every sphere!

I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!