Agnishatdal
Bhadra 1426
Critique:
Agnishatdal
Bhadra 1426, August 2019
Agnishatdal
Bhadra 1426, August 2019
By
your good old editor, few words about the works of my much cherished
authors. So the critiques will be short and sweet!
Berlin
2: Part 2 by Brieuc Martin Onraet: The
story is still very, very interesting, a young girl who is suddenly
getting whisked away to an undisclosed place for secret army affair.
Waiting for the next issue!
Tenaliraman
goes sleuthing part 2 by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Tenaliaman
is off to the disputed property to check out the claims made by two
women, and the story is getting more and more interesting! Wonder
what will happen at the end!
Lyapunov’s
children by Troy David Loy:
Fascinating story about world in an alien moon. Absolutely
fascinating and beautifully described piece of writing!
As
of above by Dom Collucci:
Very thought provoking poem! We start our journey guided and mentored
by many a things and people, then we pick up our own path! So very
true!
Bitter
Pill dose 22 by Bitter Pill: Religion:
This month BP is talking about the clash of religion and science and
how both of them are little or more obstinate about many things. I
agree about that obstinacy part a lot!
My
mythology by Freya Pickard: This
book is very close to Freya’s heart. Her vicious struggle with
cancer and its outcome are shared in this book. The cover is
haunting!
Drovers
by Pat Ritters: A
new story has begun. Starts with a cowgirl, helping her dad to round
up the cattle! Quite interesting start!
Dirkball
5 by Robert Sherriff: Robert
is the second new author in Ashar, two new members in one month
sounds awesome! Right? Robert is sharing beautiful artworks from his
storybook “dirkball”, it is for little kids. I love the beautiful
sketches a lot! I am sure the book will be worth keeping for adults
and kids both!
Bunch
of hypocrites by S4: I
fully agree about one thing with the author, at least one thing I
mean, and that is Indians should let go of their hypocrisy if they
want to really improve in every sphere!
I
believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have
to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more
works there!
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