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Agnishatdal Ashwin 1426 critique by Editor Sharmishtha Basu


Agnishatdal Ashwin 1426
Critique:

Agnishatdal Ashwin 1426, September2019
Agnishatdal 10th Quarterly Durgapuja 2019 1426
Agnishatdal Ashwin 1426, September2019

By your good old editor, few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be short and sweet!

Berlin 2: Part 3 by Brieuc Martin Onraet: I am thoroughly enjoying the story, Brian’s way of writing is simply mind-blowing! His mom is dropping one bomb after another on him, and he is allowing us to enjoy that!

Tenaliraman goes sleuthing part 3 by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Finally Tenaliraman solves the mystery! His sharp brain and power of analysis brought down the web of deceit and the righteous won the case. Well told story!

Lyapunov’s Children The Matryoshka by Troy David Loy: This one is a really scary story about what human beings might do if they have the power to do so! Really scary story for sure!

Happiness first, wealth will follow by Dom Collucci: A beautiful poem by a wise soul, I believe happiness is the real wealth that may or may not come with wealth!

Bitter Pill dose 23 by Bitter Pill: Religion: This month BP shares views about fanatics and how they spread hatred. I believe we all have seen these games being played!

Changeling by Freya Pickard: Freya wrote a fantastic story of transformation this month. The story is fascinating as always, Freya is queen of fantasy writing in my blogging circle! Her fantasy stories are fantastic!

The Drovers by Pat Ritters: This month Pat tells the story of Harry, and a fantastic poem is extra bonus. Really loved the picture the poem created in mind.

Dirkball 6 by Robert Sherriff: Cute painting of squirrel mom and dad tucking in their little ones. Very heart warming!

How conveniently they die by S4: This is something that happens all over the world, and is a real shame! We have succeeded in creating a society that protects crooks and tackles good people with iron fist! We should congratulate ourselves at our expertise!

I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!

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