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Agnishatdal Falgun 1427, February 2021 Critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Falgun 1427 February 2021

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Critique by SB


Agnishatdal Falgun 1427, February 2021

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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!


Falgun by Labanya: Very true words, even a decade or two ago Falgun was pretty pleasant, morning and night were cold, now things get grisly from Magh.


Soul’s Journey by Scott Hastie: Scott’s poetry is truly amazing! His words are wise, deep and beautiful.


Of drum-rolls and Indians by saptarchi: Well I will agree with S, it is decades of minority worshipping that has turned majority of this country into the thugs they are now. Had things been just things most probably would have been better. You can’t expect elder brother to sit and get kicked, clawed and slapped by younger brother all through his life! As a parent it is your duty to keep the balance.


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 11: I am so enjoying this story, the third eye view of human race!


A secret revealed 4 by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: priceless ending, so very beautiful! Kindness and charity is a good medicine for self-absorbed souls.


The null dance prologue by Troy David Loy: Very beautifully written, as always!


Drowning in a tear… by Dom Collucci: so very beautiful! Parched heart soothed by a drop of tear!


Bitter Pill dose 40 by Bitter Pill: Press 2: The cheapness of Indian media has ruined the faith and credibility of press and the damage repair will be next to impossible.


Lose the load 2 by Brendan: just loved it! This is Brendan’s final work for the Ezine. Thank you for being a part of the Ezine. God bless you!


The year that never was by Pat Ritters 1: It is a new story about Joe and Hannah, will be waiting to see where it goes from here.



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!


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