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Agnishatdal Chaitra 1427 March 2021 Critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Chaitra 1427 March 2021

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Critique by SB


Agnishatdal Chaitra 1427, March 2021

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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!


Bachhar ase- years come by Labanya- beautiful poem about life’s moving forward and our ways of dealing with it.


Surrender by Scott Hastie: Sometimes it is hard but surrendering to life is not a bad idea at all! Makes things much easier!


Of drum-rolls and Indians by saptarchi: Women certainly have succeeded in making everyone believe that only men harm women!


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 11: These stories really are amazing, Brian’s pen is full of wit and talent. I am so enjoying this story!


The faith mark by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Really enjoyed this story, it is fun to read. Well he certainly was blessed in abundance.


The coming of Magna by Troy David Loy: Troy’s science fiction stories are really amazing. I wish I could write such real science fictions.


I see it NOW… by Dom Collucci: Interesting poem. Life’s journey has so many twists, turns and colours!


Bitter Pill dose 40 by Bitter Pill: Press 3: It is sad how so many educated men and women forget their morals and duty towards humanity.


The warrior of light by Brendan: very beautiful and wise. If you know you are in right path everything else falls in place.


The year that never was by Pat Ritters 2: Another interesting piece about rural Australia. I did not know people eat Kangaroos! Human beings most probably eat everything!



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!



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