Agnishatdal
Jyeshtha 1427 May 2020
Critique
by SB
Agnishatdal
Jyeshtha 1427, May 2020
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By
your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished
authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
Pronoy
by Labanya:
A sweet poem that
filled the heart with nostalgia!
Farce
in the name of justice by saptarchi:
Well, speak truth in modern
world and pay the price like Jesus Christ did, only you won’t be
resurrected!
Fogline
by Brieuc Martin Onraet 2: I
just love this story! It is so much fun to read Brian’s works, he
is one hell of a writer!
When
Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Poor
fellow, well, my guess is that guy is alive and boy, to have both
your ears nicked by someone like that!
Fractal
dawn by Troy David Loy:
Sounds like Troy is extremely fond of Meera, let us see how she grows
with time! She sounds like a fully positive character like Tempest
and powerful too!
Relativity
not reality… by Dom Collucci:
Another gem from a great thinker. There is so much to learn if you
observe!
Bitter
Pill dose 31 by Bitter Pill: politics 6:
If you look around and judge Indian politicians by their performance
you too will start wondering who gives them those votes that gets
them elected year after year!
Crows
1 by Brendan: I am so happy
that Brendan joined us, his works are truly of another type, and I
love that type! It makes one think after one has finished the piece.
The
shearer by Pat Ritters 4: I
really love the way Pat paints the pictures in mind, a clear picture
of the world that he is writing about!
I
believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have
to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more
works there!
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