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Agnishatdal Kartik 1427, October 2020 critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Kartik 1427, October 2020

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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!


Kalipuja by Labanya: What a beauty. It captured the purity and beauty of Kalipuja perfectly.


Will Bengal shine again by saptarchi: This question haunts all Bengalis that love their culture! Things have improved a bit under TMC but with saffron brigade’s eyes glued on Bengal the hearts are fluttering! If they ever come to power that will be the darkest day for Bengal.


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 7: Another piece of hilarious conversation between those who have created human beings and their boss. I wonder how human beings would have looked if they had feathers!


Faithmark by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Quite an interesting story, well, instant reward for listening to a holy man. Hope he won’t become greedy and ruin the blessing.


Passing of the torch by Troy David Loy: Meera is developing quite intriguingly, I will absolutely enjoy to read the book in which she is the central character or one of the main characters.


Heart has love… by Dom Collucci: beautiful poem filled with wisdom.


Bitter Pill dose 36 by Bitter Pill: Secular India 3: This is a complain many Indians have had in past and will have in future, Indian secularism is really not unbiased, the way it should be!


The return by Brendan: Great piece, our beginning and end are so much similar indeed.


The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 4: Looks like bride’s father has given a very good wedding gift, a gift that will keep his son in law and daughter and their coming generations prosperous for years. Beautifully written piece!



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!


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