Agnishatdal
Boisakh 1427 April 2020
Critique
by Sharmishtha Basu
Agnishatdal
Boisakh 1427, April 2020
By
your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished
authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
hisab
by Labanya:
What a poem! Don’t we
all throw away diamonds and gather pebbles once in a while and then
regret!
Farce
in the name of justice by saptarchi:
These news items only see
the real India of lately, hypocrisy blown away. This country has no
place for righteous, honest and innocents! They will be destroyed
sooner or later! The evil, corrupt and unscrupulous will flourish!
For how long I wonder!
Fogline
by Brieuc Martin Onraet: A
terrific story has began, this is the first story I read in Brian’s
blog and absolutely loved it! Can’t wait to share it with you all!
I do hope and pray this book when Brian publishes it will hit
bestseller!
Vikrama
aur betala by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: I
have not read this story, that part is for sure! The sculptor was
smart for sure, smart people never stay around powerful people who
can make or break them.
Gardens
of Sarusammog 2 by Troy David Loy:
Saru meets Korravi! I just love Saru’s stories. He is so much fun!
The
dark made its mark by Dom Collucci:
beautiful poem. So very wise and deep.
Bitter
Pill dose 29 by Bitter Pill: politics 5:
Indian media is mistress of Indian politicians, they have a very
symbiotic relationship that is bad for the rest of the country.
Prophets
of God by Brendan: Great
piece Brendan. Your works truly are unique and very authentic. I too
belong to that category who prefer sages, saints and prophets alive
not crucified!
The
shearer by Pat Ritters: Fantastic
piece, Jack is out of the jail and is reprimanded by the bartender on
his way to his lodgings. Pat is a great writer and I for one am
thoroughly enjoying this journey into the lives of Australian
cowboys.
I
believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have
to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more
works there!
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