Agnishatdal
Jyeshtha 1427 May 2020
Critique
by Labanya
Agnishatdal
Jyeshtha 1427, May 2020
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Hi
friends, let us begin!
The
ezine begins with a tribute to Bal Gangadhar Tilak, I of course have
heard his name again and again but knew very little about him, glad
to know a bit more!
Farce
in the name of justice by saptarchi:
These days speaking truth
openly is like putting your hand in a pit filled with rattle snakes.
You may or may not get bit! Good and effective way of crushing
wannabe whistle-blowers!
Fogline
by Brieuc Martin Onraet 2: Mr.
Onraet is a great storyteller, well, we are inside the laboratory and
it sounds like Genesis, angels are creating human-kind! Let us see if
I am right or not!
When
Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: A
new story has started! Something hints that the poor fellow they
nicked was very much alive! Great story till now Mr. Kuppuswamy!
Fractal
dawn by Troy David Loy:
Great piece, sounds like Meera is the future empress of Troy’s
universe. A benevolent, strong and brave being! Let’s see….
Relativity
not reality… by Dom Collucci:
Great words of wisdom Mr. Collucci. Very interesting and
thought-provoking.
Bitter
Pill dose 31 by Bitter Pill: politics 6:
I too quite seriously wonder if Indian politicians actually get votes
or just tamper the EVMs, like they manipulated the ballot boxes in
past.
Crows
1 by Brendan: Fascinating
piece on crows. Their spiritual and animal significance punched
together.
The
shearer by Pat Ritters 4: Great
writing Mr. Ritter, quite an interesting look into the life that has
passed long time ago.
Treats:
five
lovely shots- from Agni’s March photography.
In
the treats section there is quite a tempting invitation for authors
who can afford.
Closing
the gap by Pat Ritter: this
book is written with noble intentions in mind, Mr. Ritter tries
helping parents to understand their teenagers better, to close the
generation gap. God bless you Mr. Ritter.
Pikatron
by Troy David Loy sounds like a great reading material with fractals
as added beauty!
SBs’
book in amazon, The lotus
of fire – a collection of poetry, sounds good! Will be checking on
them, maybe grab a copy and critique them too!
Sharan
Rani- I think I have heard
her name but never heard her playing, will try out in YouTube.
Fear
Itself: Watched quite a
few episodes they are really great!
Bharat
Bhushan- he was really
handsome, and had an aura of purity in his face, that is what I love
most about him.
Youtubia-Nameless
Will check out! Thanks for adding a bit about the story. You forgot
to change the title though, I was surprised a bit but then thankfully
the name was right at the beginning of the post.
Minutes
Together: this month’s
story “You drank my poison” was Karma dishing out the right dish
to the right recipient I guess.
Loved
the Bengali poem and the hindi poem both. Thank you for adding my
work in your ezine Agni.
Kandu
and Pramlocha- The story of a truly wise sage, even though he was
wronged he did not curse the woman who was appointed by Indra to harm
him.
TnW-
Dreams- dreams certainly are quite a mystery!
Scaredy
Stick- True again Mr. Stick, your fears are quite valid.
The
sketches all through the ezine were pretty! Very colourful and
lovely.
That
is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you
Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!
Yours
sincerely,
Labanya
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