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Agnimalya February 2019 Critique By Troy David Loy

Agnimalya February 2019
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Critique By Troy David Loy @https://www.amazon.com/author/troyloy







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Young Rumi’s father works away from home, and one day, as her mother worries for his well being he returns, seemingly replaced by a lookalike who relates the tale of the man whose face he wears, his last dying wish to protect his family. I don’t cry often, but I did just a bit for this story.

 
Secret Lover


A young man is in love, but the woman he loves has a…secret he cannot know without consequences–She’s a werewolf! It’s a short story, but told very well.

 
She


A man falls in love with a young woman at a railway station, but they never speak. He finally resolves to speak with her, too late, for after one absence from their usual encounters, only a week later, she marries another.

 
The Attacks


A newly opened mineshaft is plagued by violent attacks, and a team of paranormal monster-hunters is sent to investigate. In an old castle, more attacks are reported, and the team is sent there too, with almost tragic results, as one of the investigators is badly hurt. They return to the mine, after a period to discover, and later understand, the creature at the mine, who turns out to be an alien, one of a species that created humanity. After hearing the being’s story, the humans decide to close the new mineshaft and restrict extraction to the current shafts. The alien leaves finally, leaving the humans with a reward of polished diamonds. Hmmm. Curious, this one!

 

 

 

 

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