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Agnidal 2018 Critique: By Troy David Loy

Agnidal 2018 Critique:
By Troy David Loy https://www.amazon.com/author/troyloy

https://www.amazon.com/dp/b07fddddhf

https://shoptly.com/i/rou



 

Agnidal is the Annual Digest of Agnishtdal, here is its 2018 issue's critique:

 

1 Ghosted:




There’s one of my own first ghost stories, and truth to tell it needed more work that I had time for, though I dislike it less than I might. It’s a passable effort, but I can do better than that now than then. Meh.

 

Thanks to Agnidal’s creator for the interview. It’s not often I get to speak up on things like this. No, that’s not right: it should be: the honor of speaking on things outside of my own venues.

 
2 A Family Crysis:




Raghu Tells a short but sweet story of a young girl upset over something that seems scandalous at first, but turns out to be far from it. This had me smiling.

3 Life Style I grew Up With:

 

Dom tells a story from his past, of his upbringing and origin, and a bit of verse to boot. I found both interesting and fun.

 
4 Snowball:




Brieuc gives a story of his arrival in the world and first few years in Pakistan, and the curious nickname he acquired shortly after birth. As it’s a good tribute to both India and Pakistan’s people, I envy the rigor of his family’s record keeping that must have been involved in the story’s telling!

 
5 soul:




Hemdiva offers a short but excellent piece of verse. I find the energy-levels of both her and Agnidal’s creator to be inspirational, however beyond my current ability to emulate!

 
6 Pacific with a Pup:


 

Sherry tells some of her family history, along with a piece of art that exceeds my capacity to match in that medium. That’s why mostly I stick to something I actually get to practice, like fractals.

 
7 Get Em, Boys:




BP discusses zealots and anti-Muslim fear-mongering directed at Hindu women, and the problems with men who motivate them to turn to love outside their faith, despite the intent of the fear-mongers and the fallacy of the fear-mongering.

 
8 Should We Punch the Nazis:


 

Citizen Null has a few good ideas here regarding far-Right extremists, no, let’s just call them frickin’ nazis, and when combating them, with or without physical violence, is warranted.

 

There’s also a beautifully stylized portrait of Agnidal’s creator near the end, by Adriana Ochoa Margain. I’ve seen it elsewhere, but its beauty still wows me!

 

I enjoyed this issue, especially the interviews of the other contributors!

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