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Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1428 May 2021 critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1428 May 2021 critique by SB


Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1428 May 2021

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By your good old editor! Few simple words about the works of my much cherished authors! So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet.


Summer noon by Labanya- Marvelous, nostalgic poem, so many old memories came back while reading it.


Can I begin again by Scott Hastie: Scott’s poetries truly are full of light and fragrance, they fill up your heart with pure delight.


blackhole by saptarchi: Well, absolutely true, saffron brigade won’t stop till this country and its reputation is absolutely destroyed.


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 13: A new story, right now it is just warming up, as always very smooth and fun.


Vela Vela by Vasu Srinivasan translated by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: How do these people do it! Riding on a bicycle for hours, going round and round! Its tragic that they earn so little.


Magna by Troy David Loy: Well Agni Bose is really evil! Hope Troy is not sharing his feelings towards me LOL!


Alienated… by Dom Collucci: How I will love to join him if he goes travelling through space, looking for other realities!


Bitter Pill dose 42 by Bitter Pill: Press 5: Raveesh Kumar is a very brave and seems honest too.


Speechless by Manju Balkrishna: heart-breaking!


Dream Angel by Pat Ritters 1: Very well written. Loved his father’s expression when he came to know that Pat was about to join police department. ha!



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!



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