Agnishatdal
Shraban
1427, July 2020
Critique
by Sharmishtha Basu
Agnishatdal
Shraban 1427, July 2020
By
your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished
authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
Shraban
by Labanya:
Very nostalgic poem
filled with colours of rain, pouring rain! I really love rain
especially when it is in lap of nature, away from human presence!
Political
propaganda 2 by saptarchi:
What can I say? It is
really hilarious to research where will “Nazrul” metro station
take me! Honestly? These imbeciles are really something!
Fogline
by Brieuc Martin Onraet 3: Funny
piece Brieuc, I loved it! Love your takes on human beings! Just love
it!
When
Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Well,
wonder if they will retrieve their money, after all they were psycho
but that money was their rightfully earned wealth!
Planet
fall by Troy David Loy:
So, will Saru take Meera under his noodly arms too?
No
one is here now… by Dom Collucci:
Life is full of so many unanswered questions! Great piece of work
soulbro!
Bitter
Pill dose 33 by Bitter Pill: politics 8:
Indian politics has sunk to its lowest level till date. That part is
for sure, and in the next four years it will sink further, the signs
are loud and clear! The question is will we get an alternative? Will
the men and women leaving congress will start a new party and offer
us an option? We want a challenger to BJP, Congress is dead! Courtesy
Gandhi dynasty!
Crows
3 by Brendan: very deep and
interesting thoughts, wonder whose thoughts are being shared with us!
Where will he take us in future!
The
Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 1: Beautiful
start, the beginning of a new life and a new story. Let us see what
will happen next! Love these Australian outback stories a lot!
I
believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have
to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more
works there!
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