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Agnishatdal Shraban 1427, July 2020 Critique by Sharmishtha Basu


Agnishatdal Shraban 1427, July 2020
Critique by Sharmishtha Basu

Agnishatdal Shraban 1427, July 2020


By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!

Shraban by Labanya: Very nostalgic poem filled with colours of rain, pouring rain! I really love rain especially when it is in lap of nature, away from human presence!

Political propaganda 2 by saptarchi: What can I say? It is really hilarious to research where will “Nazrul” metro station take me! Honestly? These imbeciles are really something!

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 3: Funny piece Brieuc, I loved it! Love your takes on human beings! Just love it!

When Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Well, wonder if they will retrieve their money, after all they were psycho but that money was their rightfully earned wealth!

Planet fall by Troy David Loy: So, will Saru take Meera under his noodly arms too?

No one is here now… by Dom Collucci: Life is full of so many unanswered questions! Great piece of work soulbro!

Bitter Pill dose 33 by Bitter Pill: politics 8: Indian politics has sunk to its lowest level till date. That part is for sure, and in the next four years it will sink further, the signs are loud and clear! The question is will we get an alternative? Will the men and women leaving congress will start a new party and offer us an option? We want a challenger to BJP, Congress is dead! Courtesy Gandhi dynasty!

Crows 3 by Brendan: very deep and interesting thoughts, wonder whose thoughts are being shared with us! Where will he take us in future!

The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 1: Beautiful start, the beginning of a new life and a new story. Let us see what will happen next! Love these Australian outback stories a lot!


I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!

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