Agnishatdal
Shraban 1427 July 2020
Critique
by Labanya
Agnishatdal
Shraban 1427, July 2020
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Hi
friends, let us begin!
Shraban
issue begins with tribute to legendary warrior Maharana Pratap,
someone who fought against aggressors till his last breath. As a
child we sort of hero-worshipped him and his type. Well, I still
respect his courage, though I have not read about him in details but
still respect him
Political
propaganda 2 by saptarchi:
I too think this habit of
changing the names of roads, areas and cities should stop! Do
something new if you are such a patriot and name it whatever you
want! Don’t confuse people!
Fogline
by Brieuc Martin Onraet 3: I
really love the style of Mr. Onraet’s writing. Good description of
human beings from a third eye I will say. Rather enjoyed the quips.
When
Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Well
they certainly are in a spot, I wonder if they will recover their
wealth, good piece Mr. Raghu and Happy birthday! May God bless you
with a very long, happy and healthy life!
Planet
fall by Troy David Loy:
Another piece on Meera, another joins Saru brigade? Great piece Mr.
Troy.
No
one is here now… by Dom Collucci:
another great poem Mr. Collucci, beautiful words of wisdom, wish I
was good with Zen philosophy.
Bitter
Pill dose 33 by Bitter Pill: politics 8:
Well, I guess we can now guess who is funding Feku, and India most
probably is being colonized by his masters under the disguise of
democracy.
Crows
3 by Brendan: Great piece
by Mr. B, looking through the eyes of a prophet in making?
The
Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 1: beautiful
beginning of a story and a married life, Mr. Ritter, very sweet
piece!
Treats:
Happy
birthday Mr. Raghunandan!
7
lovely shots- from Agni’s June photography.
It
is a very nice gesture to share the request made by her friends in
Linkedin, you can never tell who may get interested in one of their
offers. I just sifted through them, not into this line so…
Dream
Angel by Pat Ritter: Sounds
like a good story.
Pikatron
by Troy David Loy sounds like a great reading material with fractals
as added beauty!
SBs’
book in amazon, Black mist
and other stories and Tell me a story- both compilation of stories!
Will be checking on them, maybe grab a copy and critique them too!
Interview
with an intercultural person Kiran Bhat, great
interview, thanks for sharing Agni. Kiran certainly has lived a full
life! His book sounds interesting if not cheerful!
Asgari
Bai- Never heard her name,
will check out the videos in YouTube.
Anna
Pacquain: She is a
promising actress, but in this era of comics and superhero movies
acting is slowly vanishing from Hollywood, it is now all special
effects, no story, no acting!
Om
Puri- Big fan of this
actor!
Youtubia-Deshbhakt
Watched a few episodes of Deshbhakt, he is honest, funny and decent.
God bless people like him who are restoring faith on Indians even if
slightly.
Minutes
Together: Bad cat was one
creepy story! Fetching kids is too much!
Loved
the Bengali poem and the hindi poem both. Thank you for adding my
work Shraban in your ezine Agni.
Prahlad-
That was one control freak father! Hey if your son loves your enemy
let him be, ask him to leave your kingdom! You don’t have any right
to kill him!
TnW-
When bad things happen- good suggestions!
Scaredy
Stick- True again Mr. Stick, your fears are quite valid.
The
sketches all through the ezine were pretty, very colourful and
lovely.
That
is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you
Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!
Yours
sincerely,
Labanya
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