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Agnishatdal Ashar 1427 June 2020 Critique by Sharmishtha Basu


Agnishatdal Ashar 1427 June 2020
Critique by Sharmishtha Basu

Agnishatdal Ashar 1427, June 2020


By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!

Megh by Labanya: A romantic poem, filled with romance. Beautifully penned!

Political propaganda by saptarchi: I too would have loved if Indian government cleaned up and kept Ganges clean instead of building Ram Mandir and Statues! But who will convince these dramabazes that!

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 3: Funny piece Brieuc, I loved it! “Pink things with big ears that eat everything and are delicious to eat...” You are awesome!

When Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Poor fellow, getting both ears cut off by a crazy man and his son! Well he had earned a fistful of those coins if not more!

Liftoff by Troy David Loy: Great description of an alien ship, wish I could imagine things the way you do! Let us see where Meera’s ship takes her!

Relativity not reality… by Dom Collucci: Beautiful words of wisdom! Great piece of work soulbro!

Bitter Pill dose 32 by Bitter Pill: politics 7: Indian politics has sunk to its lowest level till date. That part is for sure, and in the next four years it will sink further, the signs are loud and clear!

Crows 3 by Brendan: Loved the description of that small patch of land and the way Brendan described the bonding we have with earth and sun! one could actually feel his words, reading them.

The shearer by Pat Ritters 4: Great character building piece, stealing breads and sucking the inside and leaving the crust on the table! Not a nice thing to do! Very bad!


I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!

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