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Patreon May 2019 critique by Troy


SBP&B May 2019 Critique:

By Troy David Loy

Last Halt: Ranu is having strange dreams, over and again, of a train station snow, and a red umbrella. When her husband decides to take the two of them travelling, they meet someone at a railway station strikingly like that in Ranu’s dreams, and learn their secret, and of a terrible tragedy at that very station long ago. I like that Miss Basu is good at romantic themes in her stories, and that outcome of this one caught me by surprise. Excellent!

Playful Vultures: Here, an unnamed young woman discovers a plot involving three men and thier young, rich serial wives – er, I mean victims. One of them is a bit more canny than her suitors, and plays them like an instrument before discarding them. The reactions of their families and actual wives are priceless.

The Forebodings: After recurrent nightmares, young Champak loses his parents, finding that he is the inheritor of lands once owned by his royal grandparents, and a king himself now.

There, he meets young Mrinalini, whom he recognizes from his dreams of many years! With talk of a curse, and a budding love for Mrinalini, he discovers the secret of his premonitions, and saves his own life at the expense of his heart. I enjoyed this one!

The Game: Rosa plays a game that never seems to end, in strange circumstances, with her husband Jack. It concludes, and the outcome reveals a thing she desperately wanted to know, even at great risk! Fortunately this one ends well, a fitting end to this set of stories!

Agnimalya May 2019 Critique:

Desecration: When a deity statue is removed from its temple, a terrible series of events befall Jenny and Mohit, and they are forced to extreme measures to stop it. While those dead from the curse remain dead, the worst is averted! Let laying gods lay!

Foul One: With strange masks of sinister power, a woman and her child become pawns of an disfigured man and his accomplice. This one was short, but different. It would be interesting to see a longer version where the fates of all could play out, but this still ends fittingly!

Hang First: A young woman seeks medicinal flowers at a forbidden tree and discovers a foul secret, only to be branded a witch and burned. What is the tree’s secret? Things don’t go so well for the accused witch’s killers and the source of the tree’s danger spreads elsewhere! This was good!

Little Kindness: A young man enters a mysterious pool after saving a fish’s life by returning it to the water, and is rescued – by a school of fishes! This one was short and sweet, as he finds out the pool’s secret! I wonder what the origin of the curse is? Perhaps a prequel might be a good thing!

Coming Kingdom May 2019 Critique:

The Island: Siddharth is lost at sea, in strange circumstances, when he washes ashore on a seemingly vacant island – not so vacant after all, as he finds out! Once he beholds a strange but beautiful woman during his stay he becomes besotted for her, naming her Kamalika, for what he thinks is only a few days – really several years, once he is rescued!

The Mine: A terrible creature is holed up in an abandoned mine causing the mysterious deaths of all who enter. Who, or what is the creature? Where did she come from? What does she want? A tantric solves the mystery, sealing the creature in a tunnel. But the creature waits still, hearing all going on the other side of the barrier, hoping to be loosed again! This one had an ominous ending, but good.

Mysterious Encounters: Mudit is hired to kill rampaging lions after brazen attacks on laborers hired to clear a forest for roadbuilding, but a temple is found, a temple of Goddess Kali Herself!

What happens to Mudit, and what is the secret of the lions? I liked the ending to this one!

The Thing: Rekha has a problem: recurrent attacks at night involving her baby, or what she thinks is her baby. After a history of childlessness, motherhood is hell from the start, and the attacks are dismissed by her child’s nanny, Monalisa. What is Mona’s true nature, and is she who, or what, she seems? This one was creepy, reminding me of some of the horror movies of
John Carpenter, especially Creepshow!

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