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Agnishatdal Poush 1427 December 2020 Critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Poush 1427 December 2020

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Critique by SB


Agnishatdal Poush 1427, December 2020

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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!


Sheeter rod by Labanya: What a beauty. The winter sun is delicious!


Of drum-rolls and Indians by saptarchi: Harsh, sincere truths by Saptarchi. It is sad how the loudest drums subdue truth in every country!


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 8: Loved the way human body parts were described by the angel.


A secret revealed by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Beautiful and heartwarming piece.


Gods of Terra by Troy David Loy: Sneak peek behind the curtains of Gods of Terra.


Heaven takes a trip… by Dom Collucci: priceless poem, just loved it.


Bitter Pill dose 38 by Bitter Pill: Secular India 5: There is no denial of the truth that the politicians have turned Hindus into the thugs they are now. We don’t want fanatics of any type!


Energy by Brendan: Heartwarming and beautifully written. One heart looking for another.


The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 5: I am really enjoying these pieces from the lives of the newly-weds! Great pieces Pat.



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!


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