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Agnishatdal Bhadra 1427 August 2020 Critique by SB

 

Agnishatdal Bhadra 1427 August 2020

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Critique by SB


Agnishatdal Bhadra 1427 August 2020

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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!


Bandi Pakhi by Labanya: Sad, heartbreaking poem. I really don’t like birds in cage these days. Really dislike people who keep them cages in too!


Paise hotel salesman by saptarchi: My sentiments exactly. This is what Indian politicians have become, and now Indian public is getting what they have bought, stale, rotten government that can’t handle a crisis, rather prefers building temples over hospitals.


Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 5: Another fantastic episode of the brilliant story. This one is one of the best stories I have read lately.


When Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Finally the old man got a smart idea, let us see if it works out in his favour or not!


Split impunity by Troy David Loy: Whatever happened to this character? I will love to see how Troy’s Agni turns out to be, right now she sounds diabolical!


I see it NOW… by Dom Collucci: Life’s journey is full of surprises, beautiful and ugly. So very true and wise.


Bitter Pill dose 34 by Bitter Pill: Secular India 1: Just like Javed Akhtar said, our previous governments pampered minority fanatics and our current government is pampering majority’s fanatics, and the public is starving!


Crows 4 by Brendan: Loved this month’s installment of pure peace!


The Tilbaroo station by Pat Ritters 2: Cute and warm glimpse into a newly-wed couple’s life, an absolutely fresh page is opened in front of them and they are going to write down their future in it. Well written!



I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!


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